The tide is breaking: extended metaphor

The tide is breaking
against the sand.
Do I dance in the spray
or watch
the stones erode?

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  1. the insistent camel4 February 2014 at 15:20

    This works in its simplicity Holly. I like the way you have pared down what could easily be interpreted as a huge dilemma into a simple, yet still difficult, decision.

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